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drip drop
a faucet from a broken sink
silences screams
immortality
is this really all a dream

paranoia sets in
on the clock once again
tick tock tick tock

strangling myself
why wont you cease to leave me
dragging me down
im drowning again

tick tock tick tock



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Critiques


:iconblackdoorphotos:
The darkness of the poem and the image add to the overall theme, which I appreciate. I also like how the clock is backwards as well, which seems to speak to the anxiety of the subject in the poem.

What appear to be rain drops in the image keeping the nervous/anxious sleeper awake only start them off down their nervous night with their drip drops.

You have paired the image and poem together well. I feel something more is needed in the image for some reason. Everything cracks around the sleepless subject, but at the top there is some brightness. Is this the start or end of a ray of hope?
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:iconcynthiacynical:
thank you for the watch as well ^^

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May your footsteps set you upon a lifetime journey of love.
May you wake each day with his blessings, and sleep each night in his keeping.
And may you always walk in his tender love!
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Nice work!

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I love :love: Jesus yes I do I love :love: Jesus how about you?


Have you read about the "Ticking Time Bomb" ? [link]
:iconshalianel:
OMG, this is absolutely amazing!!! :wow: You're so much better at manips then me, it's totally stunning!!! :love:

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Muffin Monster!!! :eager:
:iconvidka:
tick-tock tick-tock n turning to the left :D :love:

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:iconunknownworrall:
more impressive work I see here

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Something i've never seen
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:iconcynthiacynical:
thank you so much :hug:

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May your footsteps set you upon a lifetime journey of love.
May you wake each day with his blessings, and sleep each night in his keeping.
And may you always walk in his tender love!
:iconcynthiacynical:
aww thanks so much <3

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May your footsteps set you upon a lifetime journey of love.
May you wake each day with his blessings, and sleep each night in his keeping.
And may you always walk in his tender love!
:iconcynthiacynical:
thank you so much sweetheart, and you best shh you are great at photo manips!
:hug:

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May your footsteps set you upon a lifetime journey of love.
May you wake each day with his blessings, and sleep each night in his keeping.
And may you always walk in his tender love!

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